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Translated Into: El BarĂ³n Rojo (Spanish)
User Summary: You must discover who it was that shot down the Red Baron during World War I.
Demian's Thoughts:

It's not too surprising that a book about World War I would deal with the Red Baron, and this one does a pretty good job of it, though it might have been stronger had the reader been given an opportunity to know Richtofen better and thus be more emotionally affected by his ultimate demise. Perhaps that's a bit much to ask, though. The book's gameplay is decent; it does a nice job of avoiding the inventory-related infinite loop that I keep complaining about, and its choices often relate back to the data bank in meaningful ways. The book also happens to feature some interesting (and moodily dark) artwork.

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Shadeheart's Thoughts:

[Rating: 0/10]
[Recommended? NO]

While the promising potential of the premise in the Time Machine adventure "World War I Flying Ace" is at least partially well-handled, there were particularly few redeeming components to save the quest from its prominent, pitiful weaknesses. It's unfortunate how the dangers are kept at arm's length even though the era's appealing visual-oriented choice-based design system fares well as far as reader immersiveness goes. The writing drifts from uninspired and clunky to very much aware of the narrative's potential, but - as with the majority of the books in the series - I think the adventure would've been more enjoyable had it avoided limiting itself to a single correct path; the inventory selection at the start is a bit arbitrary, I might add, and less seamlessly woven into the story compared to the databank, use of setting and handling of "characters". While the year it take place in may be 1917 AD, you won't find too many pointers suggesting a whole lot of imagination was put into the writing of this quest apart from what had commonly been covered in existing documents/research books or documentaries at the time this was written; though the research isn't exactly dated, per se, retrospectively there are parts scattered about here and there which feel VERY incomplete.

These books, which in all truth are merely self-indulgent and hard-to-find excursions into a different point in time, appear hyper-focused on their short-lived novelty value - a real shame, since the design and the execution of the linear quest itself isn't all that great to begin with. With the exception of collectors of the series or the most ardent of pseudo-history buffs, I'm afraid I can't recommend this title or any of its time-traveling trepidations. ^^

(Mysteriously disappears into the shadows.)

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Special Thanks:Thanks to Ryan Lynch for the first printing back cover, title page verso and spine images.
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First printing





Series: Time Machine no. 24
Item: World War I Flying Ace
Author: Mueller, Richard
Illustrators: Fastner, Steve (cover)
Pratt, George (interior)
Date: June, 1988
ISBN: 0553272314 / 9780553272314
Length: 125 pages (plus data bank and data file)
Number of Endings: 1
Cover Price: US$2.50

Second printing





Series: Time Machine no. 24
Item: World War I Flying Ace
Author: Mueller, Richard
Illustrators: Fastner, Steve (cover)
Pratt, George (interior)
ISBNs: 0553168525 / 9780553168525
0553272314 / 9780553272314
Description: Although it lacks an explicit label as such, the pictured copy is likely a book fair or book club edition based on the lack of barcode on the rear cover and the alternate ISBN on the front cover.
Length: 125 pages (plus data bank and data file)
Number of Endings: 1
Cover Price: US$2.50

Microsoft Reader edition

Series: Time Machine no. 24
Item: World War I Flying Ace
Platform: Microsoft Reader
Author: Mueller, Richard
Illustrators: Fastner, Steve (cover)
Pratt, George (interior)
Date: 2001
Length: 125 pages (plus data bank and data file)
Number of Endings: 1

Kindle edition

Series: Time Machine no. 24
Item: World War I Flying Ace
Platform: Kindle
Author: Mueller, Richard
Illustrators: Fastner, Steve (cover)
Pratt, George (interior)
Date: June 10, 2014
Length: 125 pages (plus data bank and data file)
Number of Endings: 1

Ibooks reissue

Series: Time Machine no. 24
Item: World War I Flying Ace
Author: Mueller, Richard
Illustrators: Fastner, Steve (cover)
Pratt, George (interior)
Date: May 1, 2017
ISBN: 1596876352 / 9781596876354
Number of Endings: 1

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