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Item - The Great Zopper Toothpaste Treasure

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Translated Into: El gran tesoro (Spanish)
User Summary: After a mishap with a chemistry set, you visit a store, have a run-in with its cruel owner, and possibly end up in a weird world inhabited by sentient toothpaste tubes.
Demian's Thoughts:

Presumably the result of a competition, this book was written by a pair of eleven-year-olds. It's not hard to see why it was published -- there are several imaginative and humorous moments that are quite impressive considering the age of the authors. Unfortunately, though, these highlights are buried within an aimless narrative that's a little too strange and disjointed for its own good. This is an admirable accomplishment for its pair of young writers, but that doesn't quite make it a readable book in its own right.

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